Streams of Consciousness Poem

In Uncategorized on June 1, 2011 at 9:13 pm

  1. Alicia! Your poem looks great! I love the way you decorated it! Also really like your stream of consciousness poem! Often times when people write these kind of poems, it gets boring because they are simply writing things off the top of their head. However, despite that, you managed you make this poems sound great and artistic! GOOD JOB! 🙂

  2. I like this poem because it somehow connects with how I ‘work’. It’s like I start thinking or planning first then I get distracted by other things happening on me, just like you! I think you have a really strong voice that it actually sounds like you sharing this to me. But I don’t really get your background. Is this supposed to relate to your pen or something? But it looks really nice! I like your poem! Good job, Alicia. (:

  3. This poem looks amazing. The way it runs is really smooth as well as pleasing to hear. Not only that, but its relatable and something we think about almost daily. Its really creative and nicely presented as well. I could see your averaged day laid out before me as i read through it. nicely done 🙂

  4. This was a very nice poem! I can totally relate to this poem, except I’m probably one of the tired faces and I don’t doodle, but I can relate to your anxiousness of wanting to get out of class and your wandering mind. When, I read the first line, I thought to myself, “Oh, this is probably going to be one of those poems that says they don’t know what to write for their poem”, but you turned it around very nicely. I also love the choice of your background picture. The carefree nature of the girl reflects your drifting mind very well.

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